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Bare Bones Writing

The boy was walking through the forest.

It was late afternoon.

He needed to reach the village.

He heard a voice calling.

He went to investigate.

The light was fading.

He thought he saw a shadowy figure up ahead.

He walked deeper among the trees.

He felt nervous but curious.

He came to a small house in a clearing.

He went inside.

Rationale: Whenever we hear or read a sentence we conjure up a mental image that contains many more details than the sentence itself provides – this is the power of our imagination.

Activity 1: Read or show the first sentence to your group, then ask them to write down or discuss what they were imagining, in as much detail as possible – colours, sounds, scents, textures etc.

Activity 2: Continue by saying / reading the other sentences in the list. These suggest a vague narrative. Working in pairs or small groups, ask open questions of one person in each group – who, what, where, when, why, how – to open up the story line. The best frame of mind is to be 'relaxed yet alert', just noticing mental impressions that appear as responses to the questions.

Tip: Don't bombard the person visualising with questions. Allow time between each sentence for impressions to be gathered.

— Steve Bowkett.

Author: Steve Bowkett ♦ Created: 14-May-2017 ♦ Access: public ♦ Article: bare-bones-writing ♦ Topics: old WordPress site, resources